I'm sincerely in love
When looking into your eyes
If I live without your love
I'll be left cold as ice
When you're beside me
My life seems colourful
The way you guided me
I won't be a fool
I've shown you my true colours
As I'm not going to pretend
From minutes to hours
I know you're godsend
Having me as your partner
You have nothing to lose
I may be a slow learner
But my love won't lose
Sometimes I embarrassed you
I understand what you've been through
If only I deserve better
I will be better
Take your time my dear
Take your time to think
As I'm floating near
Please, just don't let me sink
( aahaaaaah...this is the 2nd poem I wrote for the same girl in -Queen Of My Heart-. If you understand what I mean from this poem, is there any forcing method involve? I want to have your opinion bout this maa...)
12 comments:
leo...
balqis ere....
y did u love her so much???
its rare to find sumone like u..so fond on A girl..
maybe at a moment, she already have sumone best in her life...
jus b patient if u r truly sincere..
(p/s:somtimes we should give up)
Like I said...
when I love a girl, it means I'm being sincere...
even if there r 2 people at a time...
thanks Balqis...
u are sooo mushy.... that's good anyway..., i guess... when I thought all guys are heartless, there you are... being u...
What do u mean by mushy anyway?
All u got to do is think carefully...
n said wht u think best..
mushy? haha... mushy=jiwang... got it?
Owh...
Jiwang ker?
kuang3...
pompuan zmn skrg x suke jiwang2 ni kn?
ntah la... maybe ramai assume orang jiwang n ayat power ni player... kot je la...
player huh?
knape smpai mcm tuh skali anggapannye?
u think I ni mulut manis gk ker?
kalau tak sweet talker, takkan la poem berjela-jela... siap de 3 hadiah utk birthday with a poem for each... tp kan, pas I pkir blik, maybe u xdpt pompuan tu sbb u cpt sgt syg kat orang. so that girl assume u memain je kot...
u think like that huh?
knape dier mcm bodo sgt assume I mcm 2?
sebab I dh propose dier 2 kali maa...
kalo sangguo nak tunggu, tunggu la... tapi, i assume u slalu treat everyone extra special... like all those comments that u will always be there for them... i dh bce la comment u... tp i bkn stocker tau... kebetulan je....
Hurm...
sanggup eh?
I x tau la nk ckp mcm mne...
2 me, other people existence berkait rapat dengan pengalaman hidup yg ditempuhi...
That's why I treated them special..
how bout u?
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